tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post569596665250948317..comments2024-03-22T01:19:42.496-07:00Comments on This is my World: Friday Flash: Kissing the Dawnnerinedormanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12885964421325041778noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post-66882504715368046422012-02-04T18:20:13.900-08:002012-02-04T18:20:13.900-08:00It seems he talked Sam into continuing a bleak exi...It seems he talked Sam into continuing a bleak existence. Nicely done.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post-37442923196066162102012-02-04T14:39:26.515-08:002012-02-04T14:39:26.515-08:00The voice did come across well, and I wanted more ...The voice did come across well, and I wanted more from the character telling the story.Winnie Jean Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02703933737085081545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post-6023776594678673672012-02-04T09:00:57.304-08:002012-02-04T09:00:57.304-08:00I love the tone of voice in this one. The protagon...I love the tone of voice in this one. The protagonist has a good way with words, and yes, I do like the faint poke at Twilight.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post-26281389805762498262012-02-04T04:38:07.073-08:002012-02-04T04:38:07.073-08:00Very readable, the story has a really good flow to...Very readable, the story has a really good flow to it, and I like the dark humour woven into the words too.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post-43384503301577673942012-02-03T12:49:00.843-08:002012-02-03T12:49:00.843-08:00Your vampires are always so refreshingly different...Your vampires are always so refreshingly different from the typical uber-rich alpha leaders. I love that.Sonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351929216915547602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4213597929854074054.post-12464234987146277252012-02-03T04:35:18.480-08:002012-02-03T04:35:18.480-08:00I loved the clever ending. I can see vampires doin...I loved the clever ending. I can see vampires doing this.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com